Shards

By cherietree

Shards of glass in my eyes,
Shards of glass from the sky,
Shards of glass from kingdom come,
Shards of glass fall as one,

Shards of hope break up into pieces,
Shards of hope blow in the breezes,
Shards of hope fly in the sky,
Shards of hope flutter and die,

Shards of the heart smash and break,
Shards of the heart comunicate,
Shards of the heart are crushed and lost,
Shards of the heart are long forgotten,

Shards of a dream light and dark,
Shards of a dream are a personallised mark,
Shards of a dream float through the air,
Shards of a dream without a care,

Shards of my life slowly fall,
Shards of our lives are together reborn,


Shards of hope,heart and dreams wil forever create our life sceanes!

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© 2006 cherietree
Published on Wednesday, January 11, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Wonderful write! It speaks softly, as if it were a lingering wisp of thought... very nice. --Kaosu

  • A former member wrote: in the third stanza you forgot an h...some of the rhymes seem a little forced but i really like the tone of this peice...sorrowfull and yet somehow hopefull....a promise that should be read in a whisper....well done

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