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My hero(in)
By drop dead des
I try my best not to think of you
Nothing I do can bring you back
All that you were
has long been reduced to ashes
but when I close my eyes
you're all I can see
I stay up many lonely nights
dreaming of what we used (to be)
No more midnights in the summer rain
or larking about in the misty graveyard
tripping on what cannot be seen
only to fall clumsily into each others arms
You were always my hero(in)
You left a hole in me
that can never be filled
Though many have tried
they all have failed
The happiness that I once felt
is but a (distant) memory
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© 2005 drop dead des
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A former member wrote:
awwwww. this is so sad. i can feel how much you really cared for that person through this person. great job.
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On Thursday, December 29, 2005, spaniellie
(76)
wrote:
this was heartbreaking indeed. the (breaks) you took were fabulous, this poem is slow and you took time to bring tragedy through the moments needed. great write.
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On Thursday, December 29, 2005, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
this made me feel sad................well done......................urban
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On Thursday, December 29, 2005, weyvern
(80) wrote:
It's so tragic and emotional! I hope this is not pain you carry now! It is a magnificent peice well done
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A former member wrote:
goodness...so much agony...so much pain...so much sadness...this piece...I won't say I know exactly how you feel...but...I do know what it's like to be somewhere close to here. *Evangel*
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