born of longing/ past is still present

By forbidden

well there's a girl on the corner of oak and pine,and as she swings from her tree she's losing her mind. says the moon gets so heavy on cold nights like this and all she ever really wanted was to get lost in a kiss, get lost in your kiss. she said darlin' if ya hug me or hold me tight i could love you till the god damn day that i die, cuz baby we're dying, baby we're all dying. and as she climbs up her tree she's just hoping to fly, "oh" she says, "i pray to god i don't die, because my heart gets so heavy on cold nights like this and all i ever really wanted was to get lost in this bliss, stay lost in you bliss.




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© 2005 forbidden
Published on Wednesday, December 28, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Sticky Kitty On Friday, January 27, 2006, Sticky Kitty (241)By person wrote:

    this was fucking crazy. i love it. -kitty

  • A former member wrote: I agree totally and completely with AHHH...this is so gorgeously elegant being incomplete, changing it would leave me blue from lack of oxygen. Wonderful write! Wonderful. *Evangel*

  • AHHH On Wednesday, December 28, 2005, AHHH (184)By person wrote:

    damn. you could leave it incomplete. this is classy. i dont know if i'd be allowed to read the thing complete.

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