In Your Eyes

By meltingpetal

A hazel drifted mind
Tears create the sea I must cross
Your thoughs I can not find
You soul I feel will soon be lost

Emotions change your eyes to stone grey
A pallet of color express true value
A stare or glare chose your way
Evil or love is the eyes red hue

I sense your feelings of darkness
All tint of violet gone with distance
The eyes say it all to clear
Letting me know you no longer want me near

Though I normally feel distant from you
Tonight doesn't feel the same
Now I feel closer to your pain
Almost to the point of feeling sane

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© 2005 meltingpetal
Published on Wednesday, December 28, 2005.     Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"
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  • A Broken Soul On Wednesday, December 28, 2005, A Broken Soul (80)By person wrote:

    I can relate to this... I don't really know how to put my feelings in words... but I know this too well! awesome write & thank you. A Broken Soul~

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