sorry

By darkblue

i'm sorry that i touch you too much.
i'm sorry that i move.
i'm sorry that i'm not smart.
i'm sorry i'm not smooth.
i'm sorry that they said you kiss wrong.
i'm sorry but i want to slap them in the face.
i'm sorry but they're lying.
i'm sorry they have an opinion; that's not their place.
i'm sorry i'm not beautiful.
i'm sorry you hate the way i taste.
i'm sorry for my face.
i'm sorry i'm a waste.
i'm sorry i'm so emotioal.
i'm sorry that i cry.
i'm sorry that i'm here.
how 'bout i just do you a favor and die?

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Copyright 2003 darkblue
Published on Thursday, March 20, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I just wrote a poem similar to yours. The last line of my poem is practically the same. Very nice.

  • BleedSilver On Thursday, May 20, 2004, BleedSilver (298)By person wrote:

    I can feel the pain...~Mikey

  • A former member wrote: i thought "im sorry" would burn this poem out.. but it actually lit it up quite nicely. way to be!

  • A former member wrote: oh..how sad, depressing, lonely, I love it I know the feeling all to well.

  • Sky Singer On Monday, April 21, 2003, Sky Singer (153)By person wrote:

    as do i...... wonderful write. and sometimes, yes, we think we would be doing them a favor by ridding ourselves from this earth.... but in their apathy, it matters not either way

  • urbanhumility On Thursday, March 20, 2003, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    oh darkblue, oh darkblue........uh

  • darkblue On Thursday, March 20, 2003, darkblue (3)By person wrote:

    um...yes?

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