I Want It Now

By addicted_angel

You want all my words to balanced and measured
Everything flowing with perfect time and rhythm
With perfect emphasis on every syllable
I’m really quite fond of you she said
Her words like lyrics
Like perfectly crafted melodies
Stinging and pulsing through my veins
Releasing hot liquid over the edges of my sanity
Driving me to the point of breaking
Just to pull me back by my hair
Leaving me dizzy and unable to form the perfect words...
you make me feel

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© 2005 addicted_angel
Published on Friday, November 4, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Err0r On Friday, November 4, 2005, Err0r (365)By person wrote:

    I'm sure millions have felt this way, me being one of them. Don't you both hate and love that feeling? :) Glad you could put it in such beautiful words.

  • MESUN On Friday, November 4, 2005, MESUN (230)By person wrote:

    interesting. i don't know what to really say about it, because my mind is having trouble making something of it. must be something to do with that strange infatuated feeling labeled love, or something close to it, i think...

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