Forgotten Promises
By scorpionstale
Skeletons with knives
slashing my mind,
begging for justification
Be brought back to life.
RESURFACE the old angers
Intolerable suffering
Crimson sweetness
Naked Writhing Corpse!!
within my reformed soul
Forgot what it was like
Savory release, PASSION!
Spilling the cup,
losing the faith
What the fuck, for old times sake
Rusted razor, all it takes
Quick slash here, small gash there
Ease the pain, no one'll care
The bliss of creation, take that for divine!
This is what you created, look what I've done!
Smile on me now, you spiteful bastard
Smile at your children killing themselves
~*~*~*~
A year and a half, gone down the drain
Happyness lost, now full of pain
Unlight my candle, let in the frost
Darkness has come, the PROMISE is lost.
Comments on "Forgotten Promises"
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A former member wrote:
hmm i dont normally like these types of poems and in fact i didnt like what was being said but.. you have talent and that was not hidden from my eyes in the least good job
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A former member wrote:
Wonderful rhyme scheme on a not-so-wonderful subject...though I don't much care for cutting(seen too many friends use that for release), this piece hit me where it hurts (the heart). Lovely job. *Evangel*