Heaven Help Me
By cyan9
The skies opened within me, and there through the bliss, the mist, I watched
the jagged lines come toward me, showering me like sparks from an electronic
saw grinding through rusty nails. I tasted the sweat on their blades, I
tasted the steel as it sliced its way inside me.
I begged for heavens help, I begged for forgiveness, I begged for you to
console me. A voice in the dark recesses of my head lent forward and whispered
with a crisp tongue "You never wanted what you ask for, you never wanted
to receive". I begged and pleaded and writhed upon the floor, smearing
myself over the walls, clutching out at straws.
As I came to from my whimperings, as the beating, throbbing pain left my
head, I began to take my first steps. All I knew was that someone felt
cyan, someone felt gold before the bliss surged its way through the scar
that was once me.
Comments on "Heaven Help Me"
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A former member wrote:
I can't quite get my head around the last verse but the rest is great. The line "someone felt cyan, someone felt gold" is the best thing I've read in ages.
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On Thursday, September 29, 2005, cyan9
(7) wrote:
The last verse is about leaving myself, and the person who takes over myself receiving the bliss, or heavens help in my absense. (its difficult to word). Thnks for the comment