Remove It

By riverdreams

I can't stand to stare at it anymore

Tear it, Rip it, Burn it

I can't stand to smell it anymore

Cut it, Pierce it, Slash it

I can't stand the taste of it anymore

Punch it, Squeeze it, Slap it

I can't stand to hear it anymore

Remove it. Once and for all.

I can't stand the sight, the stench, the flavor, the noise
of it all.



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Copyright 2005 riverdreams
Published on Sunday, September 25, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I like it, it has a certain rythm and makes you think about what to take away.. i like it

  • A former member wrote: I love the anonymity of the "it" throughout most of the poem. This is really good. Powerful.

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