I see it but I cannot believe it

By maddog

This race everyday a quickened pace gotta get this
Have to get that
What about those this and that;
This you need to be and how you should live the way to look,
It makes me sick someone get her a cookie and a good book.

Blind to fate and what we have been given
So many things can come and go stripped from us (like we actually owned it though)

Hubristic hype of one man’s pride
Media’s story blown up in heaven's so called glory.
Prove to me a bigger purpose
And I tell you we deserve this
Blah blah blah don't eat this yeah smoking can kill you
So can stupid people………….. Common sense cannot be taught too naive to ask.
Shame on you never that........rock the vote but never the boat.


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Copyright 2005 maddog
Published on Wednesday, July 13, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Guttercat On Thursday, July 14, 2005, Guttercat (30)By person wrote:

    Everybody's going to the party have a real good time. Dancing in the desert blowing up the sunshine.

  • A former member wrote: this poem is kick ass i see ur point. your a fucking kick ass poet keep written!!!

  • maddog On Thursday, July 14, 2005, maddog (28)By person wrote:

    Thank you,

  • VenomPlease On Wednesday, July 13, 2005, VenomPlease (134)By person wrote:

    You made some good points. This is fuckin hot.

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