Human Sacrifice

By maddog

Slain I shall be, banished for eternity.
This life has gone very wrong in deed
The souls I have taken have now forsaken
Naked lying in filth I raise my hands in disillusion
I await eminent death’s confusion
Voices grow closer…… they have come for me
Still I lay awaiting, my beginning of eternity
Promised to be silenced and dragged away,
Her love has brought be this hate
Dammed am I for this
Awaiting life’s evil kiss
My suffering shall abolish nothing
Your avenging a power greater then all
Knowing this forever I shall love in death or in life
Love knows nothing like hate as I have known you.

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Copyright 2005 maddog
Published on Thursday, July 7, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • stormtalk On Thursday, July 7, 2005, stormtalk (727)By person wrote:

    When I read something like this, I'm like a dog listening to people talk: I don't quite hear everything. Instead, I hear something like "eternity slain damned evil suffer suffer avenge voices naked filth love."

  • maddog On Thursday, July 7, 2005, maddog (28)By person wrote:

    And?

  • A former member wrote: pain of loves cries profound in these words. so sad.

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