Anything More

By The_Lady_in_the_Fire

such a simple act
You running your hand up my back
But it still sends chills throughout my body
Your skin on mine
Sweet embraces are fine
But this touch
After what weve just done
Its the most wonderful feeling

Im slick with sweat
A mingling of yours and mine
And your hand is rough
But soft
Sending evry nerve ending into spasms
Even though every muscle is crying out in pain
Its still sweet pleasure

You whisper in my ear
Secrets amoung lovers
And the touch of your breath
Moves my hair
And tickles my ear
I can almost hear you
But dont care about the words

It is enough
Your hand rubbing my back
The whispers in my ear
The throb of my muscles
Youre here with me
I dont need anything more

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Copyright 2005 The_Lady_in_the_Fire
Published on Monday, July 4, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Incredible imagery , I had tingles down my back while reading this.

  • a_deception_unto_myself On Sunday, October 9, 2005, a_deception_unto_myself (15)By person wrote:

    Simply wonderful.A very lustful piece.Great write.

  • island warrior On Friday, July 22, 2005, island warrior (210)By person wrote:

    Wonderful sensuous piece.

  • Black_Cherry_Doll_ On Monday, July 4, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (69)By person wrote:

    wow. I like this, its really sweet!

  • A former member wrote: wow...such passion written with in each line, as each line seep of a darkend lust....Exquisite Write!....L.D....

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