This is my farewell

By smearedXmakeup

He perished in peril,
with great symphony they say.

screaming goodbye,
to his last memory of day.

He painted all day long,
his wrist became the canvas.

Her lies were his demise,
not a very good actress.

I wonder if he knew,
that i wasn't acting.

I should have told him,
but his end came sadly.


[I'm not much for rhyming poetry and the end isn't very well @ all.]
critiques/comments much appreiciated

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Copyright 2005 Amber [ smearedXmakeup ] Sheffield
Published on Tuesday, June 21, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • serotonin lost On Tuesday, June 21, 2005, serotonin lost (140)By person wrote:

    rhyming doesn't matter when it's heartfealt. this reminds me of romeo and juliet, he died due to miss information, very touching

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