Mother May I

By PoeticMindBlow

blue eyed baby girl
why is it you hate the world?

brown eyed baby boy
why is it you only destroy?

green eyed child of mine
why is it you dance alone?

red eyed child of angst
why is it you hide behind lifes gates?







-mm. don't know exactly where this one is going.. more then likely i'll add to it later.

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Copyright 2005 PoeticMindBlow
Published on Thursday, June 2, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Bluegirl On Friday, September 15, 2006, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    nice start. :) I'll be interested in seeing more if you decide to continue it.

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