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Nothing Lasts Forever
By PoeticMindBlow
You told me
All your secrets
You told me
All your lies
You told me
All your reasons..
You told me
I could trust you
You told me
I could love you
You told me
You were different
You told me
I meant everything
You told me
I was beautiful
You told me
I could be happy...
You told me
You would always tell the truth..
Turns out this time..
The only thing that comes out of your mouth..
Is a complete lie..
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Copyright 2005 PoeticMindBlow
Published on Thursday, June 2, 2005.
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Comments on "Nothing Lasts Forever"
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A former member wrote:
Wow.. made my heart ache... exact same situation I almost started crying because the pain is still raw in this poem I am on my way to write one with the same theme
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On Friday, June 3, 2005, peril_notion
(88)
wrote:
I agree wholeheartedly with this... same thing is promised each time, with just a twist on words. You always want to trust that person and feel that you need to in order to feel utter and complete happiness. Then, of course, they do the exact things they
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On Friday, June 3, 2005, peril_notion
(88) wrote:
said that they wouldn't. Great job. ~Heather
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On Thursday, June 2, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151) wrote:
I agree with Luv, At the end you could be like..."you told me...and you lied" or something like that. Great write though.~Unlucky
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A former member wrote:
I like this poem alot, the repatition sounds good, but I think if you added something more on the end, just to polish it off a little more, but otherwise, good write.
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