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a foolish notion
By forbidden
If you believe that life goes
ON-
Two lost, found intertwined (in)
THIS-
A lover's gaze into the dark
NIGHT-
Where Romeo first saw Juliet
SMILE-
Totally immersed in ecstasy
AND-
Covered in a light so bright that every
shadow may
KNOW-
It's written always and forever more
LOVE-
Although hidden in anxious hearts
AWAITS!
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Copyright 2005 forbidden
Published on Tuesday, May 31, 2005.
Filed under:
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On Saturday, September 30, 2006, Bluegirl
(177)
wrote:
Quite unique! Excellent work. :)
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On Tuesday, July 25, 2006, ashrain
(16) wrote:
teehee...i like it...it has layers...and layers make me smile...~ash
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On Tuesday, May 31, 2005, Ablebody Peckawood
(38) wrote:
Yes, this is very original. good job
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On Tuesday, May 31, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151) wrote:
This is very original. Wonderful Job.~Unlucky
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On Tuesday, May 31, 2005, peril_notion
(87) wrote:
This is very unique... I commend you. ~Heather
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On Tuesday, May 31, 2005, Dark_Goddess
(13) wrote:
OMG, this is awesome. I love the style you use, so inventive.
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On Tuesday, May 31, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
oh... this was beautiful..if we have to wait for a couple of months inbetween your amazing posts, for the privilage to read something as lovely as this...i believe that is a small price to pay..
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On Tuesday, May 31, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
and i cant speak for the rest but i will always be waiting anxiously ~kristy
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