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Take Two
By island warrior
Emotional seizure
Time now to leave ya
For where I don't know
Maybe somewhere thats easier
Just know I've gotta go
Sorry I couldn't please ya
Maybe it's me
Or the me I don't see
The silent partner
Leaning on the tree
Always offering advice
Nothings for free
Time to take two
Check out the view
Pay the bill later
Send it to who
Who-ever can handle it
However they do
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Copyright 2005 island warrior
Published on Wednesday, May 25, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Take Two"
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On Wednesday, May 25, 2005, Sin
(1135)
wrote:
smooth and sleek and packed with meaning...ive missed you, welcome back ~kristy
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On Wednesday, May 25, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Awesome write :)
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A former member wrote:
Very cool word play here. Rhyming "ya" with "easier" in the first stanza made me read the rest of the poem with what I imagined was my best New England accent. ~Ship!
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On Wednesday, May 25, 2005, elisa
(1595) wrote:
a sexy tight write.....rolls off the tongue real nice~elisa
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