Last Day...for now to I

By fritzwraith

Twelve hour shifts pained vertebrae I
24 hour vacations useless sloth I
Slave drivers & drill seargents kind to I
Flaming customers money comes to I

Work satisfies the masochistic soul of I
It quenches an addiction fought hard with I
Mental pressures controlled by I
Last day ends now for I

Soothing the irate beings was paid to I
Lies to strangers was instructed to I
DIrty tactics clothed with merits created by I
Random emotions per answer await I

Worries - Assurances
Insecurities - Self-esteem
Regrets - Praises
Indvidual - Team
Quantity - Quality
Brainwashed yet knowledgable is the mind of I

Everything heard my left ear to right ear of I
This job ... ... last day ... ... ... ends I


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Copyright 2005 fritzwraith
Published on Sunday, May 8, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I second that this is a topic not often covered. But darn if you don't shed the light where it needs to be shed. Great work here.

  • A former member wrote: that was incredibly original, something hard to come by, given how many words have been written by others..now go get some real sleep!!

  • VenomPlease On Sunday, May 8, 2005, VenomPlease (134)By person wrote:

    This is quite brilliant I must say. I particularly like the 2nd stanza. "Work satisfies the masochistic soul of I" Very well written

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