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O' Father
By Steven Jester
O’ heavenly Father
This prayer I send to you
O’ heavenly Father
How could you do the things you do?
Why
Have you forsaken me O’ Father?
Why do you ignore my plea?
Do you even bother
Looking down upon me?
How
Can you ignore YOUR word Father!
To protect YOUR children!
Ignoring OUR needs or rather
Keeping YOUR influence hidden.
But
You missed one thing Father
Excluded one “tiny” flaw
I CAN SEE FATHER!!
Better than YOU give ME credit for.
Amen.
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Copyright 2005 Steven Jester
Published on Monday, March 14, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "O' Father"
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On Wednesday, March 29, 2006, Angst Queen
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wrote:
Not the kind of writing I generally go out for, but I liked this. I love the last lines.
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On Sunday, March 20, 2005, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Not my kind of poetry, but it was not bad at all
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On Saturday, March 19, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(309) wrote:
good poem..thats what i think most of the time..but hell..thinking hurts! welcome 2 DP! ( i know, im a lil late lol) i hope to read more of ur poems soon! -Kel
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A former member wrote:
The last three lines make this poem.....very nice peom I must say
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On Friday, March 18, 2005, DarkSoul
(19) wrote:
Atheism is the answer. Good write Steve.~DarkSoul
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On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
wow...cool write..well done, and welcome to DP!!!
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On Monday, March 14, 2005, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Hmmm, I can read a few different interpertations into this, interesting. Welcome to DP. ~ wen
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