Lilly's lined her hair

By SluG

Lillys line her hair, and
On her face was a smile, making her lips taste
Very sweet that day,
Even though she frowned the rest of her life.

I only wished she had stayed,
So I could show her the many ways that love is enternal.

Every morning signals dawn,
Trailing sun beams into dewy grass.
Euphoric is the night that follows,
Rearing her head into the stars.
Nobody realizes the pain she goes through every night,
Armored with a breastplate of toughness, a front to
Lead away the pain she bears on her soul.






pay attention to the secret message in this...

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Copyright 2005 SluG
Published on Thursday, March 10, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Munkey On Thursday, May 26, 2005, Munkey (79)By person wrote:

    Dude you may just be the coolest and one of the most important people in mt life...Right on with the Hard on my man right on. _Chance_

  • A former member wrote: Hey...you told me about this today, so I decided to get on to read it...kewl dude..now you can read some more of mine, Nic

  • Sky Singer On Thursday, March 10, 2005, Sky Singer (153)By person wrote:

    love is eternal..... how true a statement, assuming the love is genuine. excellent write

  • Sin On Thursday, March 10, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    so tender and sweet...this is really beautiful...it made me smile, and the message is wonderfully stated ~kristy

  • Sin On Friday, January 19, 2007, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    this still makes me smile :) ~kristy

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, March 10, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    i can't read it....haha..my vision is blurred...but I'm sure its spectacular..

  • A former member wrote: Ahh, this was sweet and soft. Lovely write.

  • SluG On Thursday, March 10, 2005, SluG (35)By person wrote:

    thank you, if you read the side of it, it says something...

  • A former member wrote: I saw it.. I like the idea. :)

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