BLIND

By HiImFromJupiter

Take my ego, stomp it down.
Crush it, grind it into the ground.

Take my heart and do the same
so it will break from all the pain.

Take my confidence set it afire.
Take away all that I desire.

Then leave me crushed and broken within,
But I'll still search for true love again.

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Copyright 2005 HiImFromJupiter
Published on Monday, February 14, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: feminist chicks dig me sorry just had to

  • A former member wrote: funny i think girls often do the same also so i see where this is coming from come on now ladies not all guys are evil

  • DarkWolf On Monday, February 14, 2005, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    As a male myself I can understand why you hate 'men'. As with a dog.. no matter how refined and groomed he is, if given time..a dog will return to eat it's own vomit, that is the way of dogs.. -Michael

  • HiImFromJupiter On Monday, February 14, 2005, HiImFromJupiter (11)By person wrote:

    not really, i guess i just hate to love em

  • The Crimson Queen On Monday, February 14, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    i know EXACTLY how this is.. loved this write.. thanks for sharing it with us... flowed perfectly!! ~AoD

  • HiImFromJupiter On Monday, February 14, 2005, HiImFromJupiter (11)By person wrote:

    thank you for you input, i hate men!

  • thinevoicetragic On Monday, February 14, 2005, thinevoicetragic (52)By person wrote:

    very fuckin nice!! props to you.

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