Lost

By HiImFromJupiter

gaping wounds
emotional void
broken promises
feeling paranoid

lies and deceit
friendships fake
bruised and beat
too much to take

running away
leaving behind
no sun today
dark thoughts on my mind

can't seem to trust
no faith in you
actions a bust
don't know what to do

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Copyright 2005 HiImFromJupiter
Published on Friday, January 21, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Wow, this is amazing! The best I've seen on this site yet! Few words, great imagry, it even rhymed(a bonus)

  • A former member wrote: Love it... honestly!!! P.S thanks for the comment on my poem "someday." Rachel aka Hopeless_mortal

  • island warrior On Sunday, March 6, 2005, island warrior (210)By person wrote:

    Flows very well

  • A former member wrote: it's time to pick yourself up off the ground, grab anything you will vitally need, and move on to the next chapter of life. nice write. ..........................................................................................................-samone

  • A former member wrote: nice work! i liked...good job

  • HiImFromJupiter On Friday, January 21, 2005, HiImFromJupiter (11)By person wrote:

    Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated

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