Taken In

By TheVampireSergioV



In the night amongst the clouds I soar rain pours I'm soak
and wet
Below I catch a glimpse, a house,light on,warm fire
plus food I bet

Upon the door I knock once then twice, finally
invited inside
Sitting at the dinning table I'm carefully watched
by all eyes

Then displaying a smile as false as the biggest lie
I chat with them all, even hold the little one "Oh
such beautiful eyes"

Hunger pains suddenly hit deep tearing at my insides
But no dish at this table shall curb my appetite

Like the flicker of a flame I unleash my fury and rage

So quickly it spreads, the ones that took me in now
trapped like animals in a cage


My flame now distinguished, sad but content I sit at the
same table alone and bored

After gourging myself and making a meal of what was
once a happy family of four


TheVampireSergioV






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Copyright 2005 TheVampireSergioV
Published on Tuesday, January 18, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Ladyhawke On Saturday, October 8, 2011, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    Sergio has a hunger for more than blood im guessing? Thats what I get from this. Somehow, this piece bewilders me, but in a good way. A mystery. I like mysteries. Great wite man. Really. Post more often. Its a shame you havent posted in a long while. I gotta see more of you. Come back soon.

  • Ladyhawke On Saturday, October 8, 2011, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    Oh, and may I say Misery is my favorite poem of yours, but sadly comments are disabled. I enjoyed it alot. Just letting ya know.....Brava!!

  • A former member wrote: hmm..i remember this from ages ago, culd i know you, or are you a plagerist..i wonder

  • TheVampireSergioV On Thursday, March 10, 2005, TheVampireSergioV (9)By person wrote:

    I don't know what kind of basket case you are LosToy but I assume you're a little jealous of my writting.All of my poetry is original."remember from years ago my ass"..lol..stop hatting

  • A former member wrote: ooh, nice...

  • A former member wrote: Oh I likey...I likey a LOT

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