Fall Into Peices

By dropsofhate


I'm a whisper in your ears.
I whisper my love to you
I whisper.

So sweetly
This melts
Into pieces we fall

Love decreases
That's all
Bleed I do

I bleed so tall
Sing to you
This love seems too small

Inside it's great
Inside
I feel us crawl

Into pieces we fall
Love decreases
That's all
That's all

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Copyright 2005 dropsofhate
Published on Tuesday, January 11, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Ah, love. Can cause great bliss or great pain

  • Black_Cherry_Doll_ On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (69)By person wrote:

    I love the flow of this piece--Steph

  • dropsofhate On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, dropsofhate (45)By person wrote:

    thank you, ♥

  • A former member wrote: wonderful write

  • dropsofhate On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, dropsofhate (45)By person wrote:

    ♥

  • A former member wrote: I agree, very wonderful.

  • dropsofhate On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, dropsofhate (45)By person wrote:

    ♥ ♥ thanks for reading.

  • K_Love On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    Wonderful write. Well said, nice job.

  • dropsofhate On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, dropsofhate (45)By person wrote:

    thank you very much. ♥

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