Precious One
By TheVampireSergioV
Thru the window I enter like a thief in the night
but not to rob or steal..hungry I've come for a quick bite
"Oh hello little one,shhh..please don't scream or yell
Tis I your new friend come to read you a bedtime tale"
So get back under your sheets,relax, and get nice and comfy
while I find your favorite book..Ahhh here it is "Mr. Stumpy"
Now look into my eyes so I can assure you're wide awake
asleep you go..you're out like a light your precious life I could not take
A little angel asleep now such a beautiful site to behold
let me cover you with sheets and blankets so you won't catch cold
So sorry I am I did'nt get to read you a tale tonite
but I'll go now and read to mommy and daddy and afterwards tuck them in
nice and tight
Oh how it hurts to think little one you'll awake in the morning to such
a terrible horrific site
but years from now when older you'll thank god the night the Vampire SergioV
spared your life
TheVampireSergioV
Comments on "Precious One"
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On Saturday, October 8, 2011, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
I don't think the end is cheesy. But regardless, I liked it. A drive that causes you to action, but a longing hatred for the things you do, but cannot control. Sad state of affairs, that some do have situations that cause them to preform the things they hate the most. Sad write. But well delivered.
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A former member wrote:
this was an intersting read, but of course, a good poem. -Tom-
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A former member wrote:
the ending's cheesy, but none the less..good write
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On Saturday, January 15, 2005, TheVampireSergioV
(9) wrote:
Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
really good poem