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Last Fix
By HaUnTed_sOuL
She lays there, trembling
…Numbness overtaking her slender body…
~Total Euphoria~
Life flooded away from her.
Her legs lost strength first
…She will never walk down that aisle…
Her arms now limp and lifeless
…She will never hold her children again…
Her eyes were the last to go
…smaller and smaller, glimpses of the world around her disappear…
That last breath meant everything:
She sucks in Death…
…as the darkness tears at her soul…
She lightly lets go of life…
…the life she would risk for that
one
last
fix.
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Copyright 2004 HaUnTed_sOuL
Published on Monday, December 6, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Last Fix"
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A former member wrote:
thats very sad and so powerful
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On Monday, December 6, 2004, HaUnTed_sOuL
(18)
wrote:
it was kindof a weird coincidence i was sittin in home room and my friend was tellin gme about her aunt and i kind of wrote it for her...
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On Monday, December 6, 2004, Liz
(265) wrote:
Yeah, that's is. This is very strong, very subtle, very confident. Great write. You don't kill us with the message, you let us find it.
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On Monday, December 6, 2004, HaUnTed_sOuL
(18) wrote:
Thanks to Liz...I found it alot easier to write....
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