I am walking alone
By whispers in the night
The crisp air hurts
My rosy cheeks
For I am alone
Walking the path
That some used to take
Around the area
That we wish we didn’t know
And I can still hear the voices
The laughter that lingers
That now haunts my mind
And the memories that lurk
In the perse sky
I turn my head
And no one is there
Nothing at my side
Only the air that reminds me
That there is no one there
To confide
The grass
The swings
The water
My dreams
I shared
With some ((one))
Other than me
I can cry
And no one will hear
The things I tell myself
My own lilliputian lie
That I am "okay"
That I am fine
Each footstep I take
In the tears that I awake
And every move I make
'I am walking alone'
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Copyright 2004 cidney elizabeth
Published on Sunday, December 5, 2004.
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On Saturday, May 26, 2012, BrokenKatra
(61) wrote:
It is very descriptive and very vivid. I could feel myself in the woods you described. Very well written.
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On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
awesome! your talented..i really enjoyed reading this write
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A former member wrote:
Very well written
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On Sunday, December 5, 2004, A Broken Soul
(80) wrote:
i must say, i like this, especially the ending... i can relate to it well, for i too am "walking alone"... good write. ^autumn^
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On Sunday, December 5, 2004, torn_beauty
(77) wrote:
I really like this. so easy to relate to. I also love the rhythm of it, such an easy flow. awesome.
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On Sunday, December 5, 2004, VenomPlease
(134) wrote:
This is awesome. Kinda gave me chills when I read it. Excellent write
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A former member wrote:
Great wriing! i enjoy reading this! for no matter if we are in a room of crowd we still are alone screaming...screaming aloud, yet no one hears,......