IS IT Fucken Real?

By BLACKSAINT

Is it a passing feeling
am i not convinced?
a bit of uncertain of the evidence.

is it the way you make me feel?
so warm with joy and laughter.
or could it be the happiness?
from moments spent together.

the lasting bliss, the kiss i miss,
the sweetest thoughts with out a tuch.
the heart that hurts and bares a scar.
thinking how far away you are.

your on my mind most of the day,
and at night when i go to pray.
like an angel soft and gentle as you,
and as usual make my sweetest dreams come true.

thinking about you alone,or in class
writing your name on my bathroom window glass.
wishing you were hear
to love,kiss,hold and care.
to cherish and to stare.
like a bird, like a dove***but Is it Realy LOVE???

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Copyright 2004 BLACKSAINT
Published on Saturday, November 20, 2004.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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