The way i felt,...at one time

By BLACKSAINT

***the way her tears... make me want to change the world... so that it doesn't hurt her any more... yet regardless if i love her... hate her... wish she would die... or know that i would die with out her... it matters not. Because for once in my life... whatever she was to the world... she now becomes everything to me... and when i look in to her eyes... traveling... to the depths of her soul... and i say a million things... with out a trace of a sound... i know that my own life is inevitable... consumed with in the rhythmic beatings of her vary heart... i love her for a million reasons... no paper would do it justice, it is a thing not of the mind.....but of the heart***

*black SAINT*

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Published on Friday, November 19, 2004. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Comments on "The way i felt,...at one time"

A former member wrote: this is an awsome write....i can feel your love for this person....again good write
On Tuesday, August 2, 2005, BLACKSAINT (39) wrote:

thank you your as beautifull as you are sweet...look for me on your comments,but give me a sec. i'll make comments.
On Friday, November 26, 2004, Necromancer (71) wrote:

you win the great "honor" of being added to my list ..... of favorite poets not my hit list ... yet that is. Nice poem here. -Necro
A former member wrote: Very nice! OK better then nice it was incredible! Well done, favorite so far!
A former member wrote: this is beautiful
On Friday, November 19, 2004, BLACKSAINT (39) wrote:

thanks yall that means alot to me truly it does :>
On Friday, November 19, 2004, Zhee (529) wrote:

this was sooo beautiful...genuine and feeling...
On Saturday, November 20, 2004, BLACKSAINT (39) wrote:

thank you i like your poem as well veary poetic and hope to hear from you on my other works ;)
A former member wrote: very good write. So unafraid of your feelings and what others might think. I like this piece.