Alone!!!

By BLACKSAINT

people say that your alone,
with out a mind, with out a soul,
nothing at all can make me whole.
love, hate and bigotry,
a fucken world blind to reality,
yet we know whats true and false,
this world has nothing but lies and flaws.
were all alone in some way,
ether helpless, lonely or just lead a stray***


-blacksaint-

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Copyright 2004 BLACKSAINT
Published on Friday, November 19, 2004.     Filed under: "Perverse" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: very powerful worlds because we can have everyone in the world and still be alone.....good write and so true....its now one of my favorites...

  • BLACKSAINT On Wednesday, August 3, 2005, BLACKSAINT (39)By person wrote:

    ty i love your shit too its awsome

  • Necromancer On Friday, November 26, 2004, Necromancer (71)By person wrote:

    i think those words were purposely mispelled. i like it ::claps:: nice write -Necro

  • A former member wrote: It is good I enjoyed it! And to every one talking about spelling.... Personally I came here to read poetry not correct it! And even if there are mistakes this was still an assume write!

  • Zhee On Friday, November 19, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    i really enjoyed this..great flow... but just a suggestion.. you might want to proof it a little carefully :)

  • BLACKSAINT On Saturday, November 20, 2004, BLACKSAINT (39)By person wrote:

    bigotry is a word

  • BLACKSAINT On Saturday, November 20, 2004, BLACKSAINT (39)By person wrote:

    and thanks dude

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