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Hokku, and short Haika
By Derelict Dream
The Wheel Turns Ever;
Silently Spinning, Always
Here Find Broad Stages:
Wild Wind Blew In Spring;
Carrying Silent Whispers
To, Fro - Back Again.
Booming Thunder Rolls
Signalling Summer's Egress;
Welcome, Cold Seasons.
Leaves Begin To Fall;
The Wind's Whispers Gain A Voice
Morrow, and Colder.
Soon Shall Come Winter,
Short Daya, Long Nights, Pleasant All;
This Is My Ardor.
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Copyright 2004 Derelict Dream (David O. Wilkins)
Published on Monday, October 25, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Hokku, and short Haika"
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On Friday, January 12, 2007, Grim_Sorrow
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wrote:
nice flow, great write. Glad to have stumbled across it.
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On Tuesday, November 9, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Truly Wonderful piece of work...Perfect rythm and fantastic form of expression...well done indeed...
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A former member wrote:
- I am sincerely impressed and will add this to my favourites. ~ Rose.
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A former member wrote:
This is brilliant . . "Booming Thunder Rolls Signalling Summer's Egress;
Welcome, Cold Seasons. Leaves Begin To Fall; The Wind's Whispers Gain A Voice
Morrow, and Colder. Soon Shall Come Winter, Short Daya, Long Nights, Pleasant All; This Is My Ardor.
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On Tuesday, October 26, 2004, agentlemenspromise
(42) wrote:
nice
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On Monday, October 25, 2004, Storm
(143) wrote:
This kind of rythm is heaven. And you make it so.
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