Too Much

By xSightxSetxHighx

The constant struggle
All of the pain
Some days it's hard to handle
Some days i'm just numb
My mind filled with thoughts
About how things were before
Now you are so distant
I don't like what you've become
I worry that you are moraless
I worry you lost faith
You push me away
As if it's too much
It makes the pain worse
You're scaring me
Making me wonder if you're alright
Stop my pain, make it okay

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Copyright 2004 xSightxSetxHighx
Published on Saturday, October 23, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • StAinedNblood On Monday, October 25, 2004, StAinedNblood (27)By person wrote:

    Yay! I love this poem. Good describtion of your feelings =)

  • Lynaes On Saturday, October 23, 2004, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    you know..ilove the potential this has,.. whatyou're putting across.. but if youelaborated on what you're saying.. it could be brilliant. good job though,really.

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