Where teardrops drown

By whispers in the night

Teardrops drown And become lost
And The smiles start to fade
Life is too confuising
No one can get out
of this winding maze

I don’t understand why we always have to loose
Why cant we all win in life
Why cant we all choose
The path we are headed for
Along the shattered glass, on the floor
Spins us into the dazing wind
And we are caried to a place
Where new life can begin
And from a seed we grow
Into out own dark velvet petals
And our stems begin to know
That each rose has its thorne
That makes us bleed
The scarlet blood that lingers
Down our own cold fingers
It freezes in place
And we view our lifes disgrace

The laughs, the lies, the love
Its visable to us now
Every single slip we made
Its imprintss are left there in the ground
The footprints from when we ran and when we gall
Is leading us all
Down our own hard journey
Where Teardrops drown

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Copyright 2004 cidney elizabeth
Published on Thursday, October 7, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This is just so beautiful "And from a seed we grow Into out own dark velvet petals And our stems begin to know That each rose has its thorne" - wow. It's tragic how such an amazing piece of work has so few comments. Amazing. ~*~ Rose ~*~

  • hopeless On Monday, October 11, 2004, hopeless (51)By person wrote:

    *gives you a hug*.... you know ive never stopped loveing you and the fact that your poetry is even more amazing than mine.... ~hopeless

  • whispers in the night On Tuesday, October 12, 2004, whispers in the night (11)By person wrote:

    allright,but i do not think so little one, your poetry is much more grand

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