Pale Creature

By Reichsfuhrer-SS

Wind blows
beneath the moonlight
A rustling
from a dark corner
Pale eyes
Pale flesh
Pales claws
Scrape, slither
growl, hiss
Nobody around to see
Pale creature beneath
Pale moonlight
All alone
Moon sets, sun rises
Pale creature is
No more

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Copyright 2004 Unholy Warrior
Published on Tuesday, September 28, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Kinkypoptart On Sunday, May 1, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Pure beauty. ~*~Tart~*~

  • Lynaes On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    Very interesting, and really quite different. It was refreshing to read, I don't know what it is about this poem, but I quite liked it. Nice work.

  • WinterGrave On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, WinterGrave (258)By person wrote:

    interesting, enjoyed the read.~~~Grave

  • Revolting Theatre On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, Revolting Theatre (31)By person wrote:

    sounds like the monster under my bed....Josh

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