torn the frayed

By gracefullytorn

im so utterly torn the frayed edges singe w/ indecision
and whats true is too true to handle
the hold is too strong
i wear my heart on my sleeves
but they're just too short
my heart, twist and contort at your will
swim with me, upstream, through my veins
im torn to the extreme
the thread is unraveling
theres two strings left
which one do i choose?

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Copyright 2004 gracefullytorn
Published on Wednesday, August 11, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Heh, Reminds me of Walt Whitman, 2 Roads Diverged in a Forest, I chose the one less traveled. Nicely written. ][][

  • saellem On Thursday, June 23, 2005, saellem (21)By person wrote:

    nice ..when i read it..it hit me dramaticly...

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