Angel Of Mine

By lonelygurl

My angel has gone away
Leaving me alone in this place
With no choice but to stay

If i try to leave
The pain will end
Anger is all i will recieve

I am falling down
The water sucking me under
My last sight is your frown

If you knew the pain I felt
How it hurt to hear your voice
How would you have dealt

You are the angel of my dreams
The one I want forever
Now its all falling apart, ripping at the seams

Time will heal this breaking heart
For my angel has gone away
If i knew the tragic end, would it have ever started

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Copyright 2004 lonelygurl
Published on Thursday, July 22, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • whisperer On Sunday, November 26, 2006, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    lovely tragedy

  • Kinkypoptart On Saturday, April 16, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    very deep and very sweet. I love it. ~*~Tart~*~

  • elisa On Friday, July 23, 2004, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    A very deep poem.Right from the soul..well done

  • A former member wrote: this kind of pain i know all to well, very touching, i like it

  • A former member wrote: The last two verses are my fav, Nicely done.

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