Am I the Only One?

By gracefullytorn

Sometimes I stare at things and let my mind wander. I like to focus in on really small things or small parts of big things. I put the parts next to eachother in my mind and look at the images I create. They always look so beautiful to me even if it is sometimes the decaying corpse of a bird or a broken tree branch. Most of all I love staring at people.
I look and look until I can see their emotions expelling from every pore in there blank faces. I sympathize with them so much. I've never looked and not seen pain. I imagine myself in their mind, in their body, seeing as they do.
Sometimes I sit in my room staring at the wall, but I'm really staring into the imaginative nothingness that is my thoughts and I imagine all the people that are dying at that very second and the lives they lived and people they effected. I cry when I see them dying. They're always reaching out pulling on that last string only to realize there's no one on the other end. i wonder if I'm the only one who sees them. I wonder if I'm the only one who really looks.

signed, a lonely mind.

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Copyright 2004 gracefullytorn
Published on Thursday, July 15, 2004.     Filed under: "Essay"
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  • A former member wrote: Aww So Fulfulling, Simply wonderful. awesome piece ][ ][

  • the dried flower On Saturday, October 15, 2005, the dried flower (67)By person wrote:

    wow(nope your not the only one my friend)

  • Daegonna On Saturday, August 28, 2004, Daegonna (27)By person wrote:

    no definately not.. i do too sometimes ~Daegonna~

  • A former member wrote: no, your not.

  • A former member wrote: Seeing into the soul of a compassionate person is always a delight. No, gracefullytorn, you are not the only one. I relate to this peice in more ways than you'd probably think possible. Thankyou. Nice write.

  • A former member wrote: Every damned day I catch myself wondering what came before. Debating finite vs. infinite. And every day I come to the same conclusion. Strings dont have an end. Just my humble opinion.

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