Preyed Upon
By TheVampireSergioV
From across the room I sit and stare
So beautiful she is with her flowing hair
She moves with the grace of a ballerina
And knowing she could never be mine
I wish I had never seen her
Then reading my thoughts with piercing eyes she glances my way
An hour passes many drinks later in my bed we lay
After conversing we passionatley begin to kiss
her now fiery eyes and beautiful lips I have my wish
Suddenly my neck she bites oh what a terrible wonderful pain
My eyes now fixed on these horrific fangs
Now coldness darkness still paralyzed on a steel table I rest
Sounds I hear but whats now happening to me I can only guess
Then I hear a voice "This is coroner's report number 124,
I'm now about to perform the autopsy on the blood drained corpse
Of one Mr. Stanely Moore"
TheVampireSergioV
Comments on "Preyed Upon"
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On Saturday, October 8, 2011, Ladyhawke
(394) wrote:
Love the ending dude. Love with a bite>=)
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On Sunday, February 13, 2005, TheVampireSergioV
(9) wrote:
Thank you so much "frozen"
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A former member wrote:
amazing
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On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, Fourknaz
(6) wrote:
Cute
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On Thursday, November 11, 2004, TheVampireSergioV
(9) wrote:
I've been away and have just view your comments Fourknaz..Thank you so much. SergioV
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On Wednesday, July 14, 2004, lonelygurl
(5) wrote:
thats really cool. and very graphic in the way i can see it in my head
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On Thursday, November 11, 2004, TheVampireSergioV
(9) wrote:
Thank you lonelygurl and velndefined
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A former member wrote:
hah, nice peice dude...liked the ending.