Preyed Upon

By TheVampireSergioV


From across the room I sit and stare
So beautiful she is with her flowing hair


She moves with the grace of a ballerina
And knowing she could never be mine
I wish I had never seen her

Then reading my thoughts with piercing eyes she glances my way
An hour passes many drinks later in my bed we lay

After conversing we passionatley begin to kiss
her now fiery eyes and beautiful lips I have my wish

Suddenly my neck she bites oh what a terrible wonderful pain
My eyes now fixed on these horrific fangs

Now coldness darkness still paralyzed on a steel table I rest
Sounds I hear but whats now happening to me I can only guess

Then I hear a voice "This is coroner's report number 124,
I'm now about to perform the autopsy on the blood drained corpse
Of one Mr. Stanely Moore"






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Copyright 2004 TheVampireSergioV
Published on Wednesday, July 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Ladyhawke On Saturday, October 8, 2011, Ladyhawke (394)By person wrote:

    Love the ending dude. Love with a bite>=)

  • TheVampireSergioV On Sunday, February 13, 2005, TheVampireSergioV (9)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much "frozen"

  • A former member wrote: amazing

  • Fourknaz On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, Fourknaz (6)By person wrote:

    Cute

  • TheVampireSergioV On Thursday, November 11, 2004, TheVampireSergioV (9)By person wrote:

    I've been away and have just view your comments Fourknaz..Thank you so much. SergioV

  • lonelygurl On Wednesday, July 14, 2004, lonelygurl (5)By person wrote:

    thats really cool. and very graphic in the way i can see it in my head

  • TheVampireSergioV On Thursday, November 11, 2004, TheVampireSergioV (9)By person wrote:

    Thank you lonelygurl and velndefined

  • A former member wrote: hah, nice peice dude...liked the ending.

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