Fields of White

By Reichsfuhrer-SS

Fields of white
Stretch forever
Never stopping
All around me
Forever and never
Hollow purity
I'm falling and rising
Running and standing
In pain and pleasure
So quiet it deafens
So loud it can't be heard
Seeing to infinite
And not at all
Perfection
No escape
Why would you want to leave?

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Copyright 2004 Unholy Warrior
Published on Sunday, July 11, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Perfection? But perfection is freedom. The last line, "Why would you want to leave?" to me that seems as of you're implying that you want to leave. Personally I would. I mean, "No escape"? No change in the fields of white? I really like this poem, I should check out more of your work, well done

  • A former member wrote: Wish I could stay in that place.

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