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A Broken Rhyme
By nobody-in_the_darkness
Everything seems so wrong
But It's been goin on for so long
All the pressures that I can't take
All the decisions that I can't make
All the hearts that I have broken
All the pain that you've awoken
All the scars that are on my arm
Were brought apon by your harm
I hate this place that I am in
Simply because of all the sin
All the times that you wern't there
I'd simply say that I don't care
I hide behind all the blacks
Trying not to face the facts
As I sit alone and cry
I'd look at you trough red eyes
Try to tell you that I'm gone
I was in a place where I didn't belong
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Copyright 2004 nobody-in_the_darkness
Published on Saturday, June 19, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Very strong, I love to read raw emotion. I have many friends who know how you feel, I will not pretend that I do though, just remember, those who hurt you aren't always worth the scars. Nevertheless great work. :)
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A former member wrote:
oh... i've felt that before.
i hope you're better... or feel be better soon... i guess it never goes away completely. this is a really strong piece, it is so sad... -Miko-
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On Sunday, June 20, 2004, nobody-in_the_darkness
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yes im better now and thank you, you are right the feeling never compleatly goes away thanks again
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