Here i lay

By whispers in the night

Here i lay
peaceful and pale
no warmth in my flesh
no life i can inhale

Close my eyelids
and kiss my lips
touch my skin
and watch the sweat drip

Just let me be
im better off here
closing my eyes
and death will come looking for me
in time

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Copyright 2004 whispers in the night
Published on Friday, June 18, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Good piece of wanting solitude and death. Nice job.

  • A former member wrote: I love it! You ve got good visual wording.

  • Heart of Stone On Friday, June 18, 2004, Heart of Stone (24)By person wrote:

    ooooh! I'm in love with this. Def. a favorite!! This is awesome. -Heart

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