I Loved You!

By GothBear

Fuck you
I wish you would die
I trusted in you
but you were nothing more than a lie

I opened the door to my heart to you
and all you did was turn away
you knew I would die without you
when all I wanted was for you to stay

I was true to you
I loved you and you knew it
and still you didn't care
I gave you my heart and
you steped all over it

You knew I was there
that dark cloudy night
and you still kissed her
Everything became clear that night

I couldn't stand it
you did it on purpose
You knew I loved you

That night I commited a crime
I commited a sin
I stabbed her, I killed her
I was burning so much from within

You said you loved me
but it was too late
I wanted to kill you
but all I could do was hate

I will never forget you
I couldn't live without you
I used the same knife
To leave this world, to end my life

I will always remember you
I will always love you
even though you din't love me.



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Copyright 2004 GothBear
Published on Monday, May 24, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Kinkypoptart On Tuesday, April 25, 2006, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    So much passion was put into this write... I felt every ounce of pain. Great write ~*~Tart~*~

  • A former member wrote: Wow..very deep. I like it.

  • aXe FactoR On Tuesday, June 8, 2004, aXe FactoR (335)By person wrote:

    the last stanza was heartbreaking. power write i would say. -MeL-

  • gracefullytorn On Monday, May 24, 2004, gracefullytorn (61)By person wrote:

    Very cold..and hateful. Great work.

  • Midnight Shadow On Monday, May 24, 2004, Midnight Shadow (67)By person wrote:

    Wonderful GothBear. That person truly didn't deserve to be respected or loved if they did that. ~Midnight

  • GothBear On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, GothBear (13)By person wrote:

    he reallydoes desserve to be hated. Thanks!!

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