I Loved You!
By GothBear
Fuck you
I wish you would die
I trusted in you
but you were nothing more than a lie
I opened the door to my heart to you
and all you did was turn away
you knew I would die without you
when all I wanted was for you to stay
I was true to you
I loved you and you knew it
and still you didn't care
I gave you my heart and
you steped all over it
You knew I was there
that dark cloudy night
and you still kissed her
Everything became clear that night
I couldn't stand it
you did it on purpose
You knew I loved you
That night I commited a crime
I commited a sin
I stabbed her, I killed her
I was burning so much from within
You said you loved me
but it was too late
I wanted to kill you
but all I could do was hate
I will never forget you
I couldn't live without you
I used the same knife
To leave this world, to end my life
I will always remember you
I will always love you
even though you din't love me.
Comments on "I Loved You!"
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On Tuesday, April 25, 2006, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
So much passion was put into this write... I felt every ounce of pain. Great write ~*~Tart~*~
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A former member wrote:
Wow..very deep. I like it.
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On Tuesday, June 8, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
the last stanza was heartbreaking. power write i would say. -MeL-
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On Monday, May 24, 2004, gracefullytorn
(61) wrote:
Very cold..and hateful. Great work.
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On Monday, May 24, 2004, Midnight Shadow
(67) wrote:
Wonderful GothBear. That person truly didn't deserve to be respected or loved if they did that. ~Midnight
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On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, GothBear
(13) wrote:
he reallydoes desserve to be hated. Thanks!!