Scars
By Arsonick
Now I have these scars to bear,
Looking back, you're never there,
Painful memories of you abound,
Your betrayals, my soul surround.
Thought you were the one I trust,
Always fake, to my disgust,
Abandoned me, when I needed,
Was your brother, now defeated.
Never there for me,
Always haunting me,
Why could you never see,
The pain that you've set free?
Days and days go by,
I stay and wonder why,
You left me here to die,
With pain beneath my eyes.
Always alone and beaten,
Someday my heart you'll see, then,
How sick of your lies I became,
Forgotten soul that screams in pain.
As I stand, I am broken.
My last chance, words you've spoken,
My trust you've taken and betrayed,
My life, this hell that you have made.
This is actually a song I'm writing but it started out as a poem so that's
why I listed it in poetry. Well, this is my first poem that I've posted
on DarkPoetry so I hope you enjoy. -Nick
Comments on "Scars"
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A former member wrote:
this is so...smoothe...it just flows so well. i love it.
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On Sunday, June 13, 2004, SilencedAngel
(52) wrote:
Amazing work. Very fluid to read.
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On Friday, June 11, 2004, Blyss Rayne
(9) wrote:
oooo, me likey! teehee. I could see this as a song, and a good one at that! great job -Taylor XD
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On Saturday, May 22, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
reads like it would really work as a song man ... i like it ... welcome to DP man ... funguy