Jack Shit

By Ideas

Can't understand it myself
So how can I explain?
Just this sadness
This phantom pain
Feeling trapped
Can't find my space
Don't fit here
Put me in my place
Won't you let me out?
Close my eyes
But I still hear
So many hours before sunrise...
Same old patterns
Take me away
Putting down this pen now
'Cause there's jack shit to fucking say...

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Copyright 2004 Ideas
Published on Sunday, May 16, 2004.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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  • Drifter On Sunday, May 16, 2004, Drifter (265)By person wrote:

    The dragging pain that never leaves. You can hide from it but it always returns. What's really hard to remember is when it first showed up. very kewl "D

  • capt_funguy On Sunday, May 16, 2004, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    "so many hours before sunrise ..." desolate sweet ... dug this work .... caged animal ...pacing with frustration ... cool ... funguy

  • birdwell On Sunday, May 16, 2004, birdwell (138)By person wrote:

    yep.. i get to this same place some times, for having nothing to say you said it pretty well :) ~db~

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