Daffodils II

By Guttercat

With daffodils and ecstasy pills,
I await the morrow's dawn.
But what relief hath they brought to me?
'Tis for you I wrote this poem.
I feel a stirring within my chest,
The beating of my heart.
‘Tis this how it feels to love,
So lost when we’re apart?
Hold my hand, gentle love
Guide this sightless man.
Bring me away to where you’ll go,
A milk and honeyed land.

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Copyright 2004 Guttercat
Published on Wednesday, April 28, 2004.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • aXe FactoR On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, aXe FactoR (333)By person wrote:

    all i can say is, you tell so so much with your writes although they were short... thats real talent, letting ppl imagine so many things in such a short space of time. great write on this one :)

  • K_Love On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    Beautiful write! ~Kirsten~

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