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Forgotten
By gracefullytorn
Your like the flower on my casket
a death notice
and a heavensent prayer
your name is etched into my gravestone
chizeled into me
your like vines covering the sun
you filled the hollow ground
with my innocent blood
but I am never visited
by your crying children
just left to disinigrate
I'm already forgotten
five years ago tommorow
you left me here
here's a little something im working on not done yet...
your misused metaphors
stem from stifled signifigance
cornering me into clandestine crimes
destroying deeponed demons
is the only way I can survive
uplift my insecurities into unknown boxes
storing them in a dark closet
consealed by conservative censors
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Copyright 2004 gracefullytorn
Published on Sunday, April 18, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, October 16, 2006, Kinkypoptart
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wrote:
wow, you had me from the very first line. Great write ~*~tart~*~
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On Sunday, April 18, 2004, Exodus
(172) wrote:
i liked the first one....the most in particular.....but i liked them both...nice job!
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A former member wrote:
Enjoyed the top very much. "your like vines covering the sun" Beautiful image. +T.P.U+
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On Sunday, April 18, 2004, manywalks
(750) wrote:
Liked both; enjoed the second with its dangling feel, the sense of something that needn't be said, just the way it is. Wonderful work. ~ mw
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