Look to the Sky

By rage_angel

The dark clouds
Hang so low
Close to the ground
Far from Heaven
To the people below
It's so close
Feel the mist
Upon your face
Soaked to the bone
Feeling alone
Look to the sky
Covered with gloom
Hear the thunder
Feel the boom
Throughout your body
Echo in your ear
Covered in fear
Look to the sky
Heaven is so far
Hell is right here
Living the storm
The Devil takes form
The rain falls down
The clouds are dark
Your beating heart
Echo in the wind
As the breeze blows
The rythm takes control
Look to the sky
Heaven is too high
Or am I too low

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Copyright 2004 rage_angel
Published on Thursday, February 26, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: gave me chills

  • Cherry Bear On Saturday, October 10, 2009, Cherry Bear (25)By person wrote:

    This was a great night time read, Its was beautiful and gave me great imagery. Thank you for the amazing read. Cherry~

  • Bluegirl On Sunday, September 24, 2006, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    WOnderful write. Has a certain feeling of doom. Keep the ink flowing!

  • A former member wrote: Thoughts of worthlessness are so common. This is good. "Heaven is so far, Hell is right here" exactly how I feel right now. Leap into the soul of another and see what you can discover. Keep 'em coming man. - U.P.

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