I dunno....

By Blacken_Heart

i like the pain,
i like the rain,
all that we could gain,
you made me cry,
i hate i,
if only we could die,
I'd be your hell,
were you'll dewl,
I hope you'll do well,
don't never cry,
is that a tear in your eye,
It's only Good Bye.


I just free wrote that. it suckss ass, not good ass, but i'm mean big ass, Like someone who has been in jail ass.

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Copyright 2004 Blacken_Heart
Published on Sunday, February 22, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I actually enjoyed the i hate i line.

  • nell On Sunday, February 22, 2004, nell (270)By person wrote:

    rofl great profile pic

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