Return of Feeling

By ashrain

I think the walls have fallen.
The screws come loose.
The center exposed.
I think the clouds have gone.
The sky blue.
The birds free.
I think I hear my heartbeat.
Its loud.
Its harsh.
....Its comforting....

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Copyright 2004 ashrain
Published on Friday, February 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • italianbella On Saturday, December 22, 2007, italianbella (183)By person wrote:

    very well expressed feeling as though I can relate great write made for a nice read

  • A former member wrote: Keeps you up at night. your pulse. Beats untill you scream and slam your head against a wall. Like it. Reminds me of panic attacks when I took too much cough syrup.

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