I Scar

By Juggalotus

Written by the blood of my hand
Black in my veins, pulsing and dripping
Feel the rate, grab the reins, and begin to hate
You can hate, that's great while I love
And my apathy wil rapidly decapitate
Your mind, it's mine, should I use it?
You'll lose it, you always abuse it
So I take what you feel
And I take what you think
I imagine and hope, and my dreams become real
I'm inside your head when you play
I'm inside your bed when you lay
Everywhere you are, there is my blood
Never forget me, blood stains
Permanently pressed in your head
As darkness overtakes you
The anger, it shakes you
This speech which rapes you
From my veins
To your head
My words
To your mind
My thoughts
To your life
I Scar

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Copyright 2004 Juggalotus
Published on Thursday, January 8, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: "Written by the blood of my hand..Black in my veins" I love this! It does almost sound like a song, and I really like it! ~Wish Upon A Star

  • A former member wrote: This is great work. I think your rhymes are very good. Just write how you feel. Sometimes I rhyme and sometimes I don't. Let it flow how it comes to you. Wonderful job! ~JD

  • stormtalk On Friday, January 16, 2004, stormtalk (727)By person wrote:

    You have the intelligence to be an excellent poet... but your rhymes are holding you back. Don't imitate the music you listen to... find your own style ;)

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